准备出国留学去法国的申请者,在进行材料的准备的时候,一定要重视陈述的影响,必须要确认好自己的能力达标。下面就由出国留学网介绍法国留学个人陈述怎么写才可以加分?
写作内容
1. 申请人对该专业的认识与理解,表达申请人的专业发展职业规划
写自己对所申请专业领域的了解,对该专业的见解,对自己在该专业的发展目标,职业规划等,表妹自己对该专业的热爱以及学习的热情。在写到专业认识的时候切记抄袭他人的说法,可以有借鉴,但是还是要有自己的理解。
2. 申请人背景或者是经历,表现出自己适合该学校
申请人背景和经历方面不要写简历里面重复的内容,个人陈述最忌讳的就是表达的大学跟个人简历里的内容没有区别,因为个人陈述是跟个人简历相辅相成的,却不是重复冗杂的。这里的经历要对所申请学校的要求有一定关联。
3. 对该学校的了解,表达学校是适合自己的
写对学校的了解的同时要注意学校对申请者的要求,你要在这里突出自己所达到的那些要求,而不是突出自己的不足,当然不是要你隐瞒自己做不到的要求,要学会扬长避短。
写作原则
1. 个性原则
一千个人看哈利波特就有一千个哈利波特,每个人的个人陈述代表的都是他自己,所以个人陈述是写自己,你跟别人的不同才这个个人陈述的重点。
2. 专业原则
不要离题,个人陈述要包括资金在给专业方面的一些见解,为什么想学这个专业,有些什么学这个专业的计划等等。
3. 优势原则
突出自己的优势,比赛获奖,参与什么国际的,代表国家的活动等等,表现自己在中国专业的强势能力。
4. 自信原则
个人陈述有要谦虚的地方,就是不要铺天盖地的将自己所获得的所以大大小小的奖项,但是整体来说,自信还是更重要的,大方的表现自己的优势,自己的能力等等。
5. 清晰原则
不论是你写的经历还所获得的奖项这些都必须清晰,有逻辑,不能是假的,要在许多有这种经历或奖项的人力表现出你的不同或者完整。
个人陈述范文
I thought much before I began to write the PS. However, holding the pen, I suddenly felt wordless because I have too much to say, too much to write. Standing on the crossroad of life, I determined to study abroad without any hesitations.
It was not the desire for the life overseas, but the pursuit of my professional study that aroused my idea to study abroad. I was longing for the further study and embedded understanding of the essence of Information Science, tasting its charm. Pocketing this interest, I came into the department of Beijing Forestry University. Through several years’ study there, I gradually realized that the modern information society needed not only the professional talents in information science, but also the embedded researches in this field in order to use it into every enterprise. Meanwhile, it is certain that the information science is just the developing trend in the future, which could historically change the ever familiar life style. Therefore, in the process of learning, I can taste its interest and challenge, with which I can keep abreast with the latest technology. Furthermore, I think it was valuable for me to contribute my youth into the Information Science, the most prospective enterprise in the future.
My ordinary score on my school report will tell you that I am not good at examinations. Those so-called “examination skills” are also strange to me. Instead, I emphasize the practical operations and the real needs of the society, expecting to learn the knowledge and technology that stands at the top of the period. Therefore, I got the latest knowledge mainly by reading large amount of English books and browsing the websites. Besides, I participated in many practical activities, in which I could use what I have learnt into practice.
In my sophomore year, just as other schoolmates were submerging themselves into the fairy world of PC games, I began my part time working experience by working as a technician on the website of a small company. Just at that exciting time, I found that it was very difficult to use the theories I learnt on class into the practical work. Trapped in the gap between the school and society, I collected and summarized much practical professional files from a series of websites and learnt the HTML language and the CSS design by myself. From the first attempt in the society, I realized that I got much from difficulties rather than smooth work. On designing the information part of the website, I could not find the perfect combination between the files. However, as a hard-nosed boy, I was not defeated by the difficulties, but very excited towards them. By classifying and summarizing the files I found on the websites, I finally solved the problem.
Taking advantage of my insistent efforts, I was finally kissed by an opportunity to participate in a developing project, in which I worked as a core assistant of my teacher to develop the Iptables module under Linux. From a theoretical point of view, the development of the module could be included in the basic theories of the operating system. However, it was another challenge for me because I was not familiar with the programming of system module. Finally, I found the related knowledge on a book named “Module Programming”. Thanks to my repeated attempts, times of failures, at last, presented me with the final success. Through this practice, I believe firmly that failure is the access to the success.
I had a dream when I was just a kid----becoming a member in Chinese Academy of Science, the pioneer of the science and technology in China. My senior year witnessed me to achieve my dream. Under the recommendation of my teacher, I got the opportunity to work with the professors in automation department of CAS on developing the interface based on the biometric authentication technology. Two weeks was a short time, but a harvest time for me. Through the exchange with the experts and professors and looking up large amount of books and related literatures in the library, my understanding on all the specifies BIOAPI interface, the design of the 类 and data structure and the biometric interfaces had largely deepened. Seeing the final success, the sweetest smile in the world blossomed on my face.
My assiduity in study and careful working attitude won the appreciation of the professors in CAS. Therefore, at the last period of my undergraduate study, I was recommended by them to complete my graduation design by participating in a graduate subject of Chinese Blog Search Engine.
As the assistant, I completed the access and storage of the Blog data by using C language and Perl database. With the help of my studying fellows, I finally designed a frame of the Blog Search Engine and learn many new technologies.
After graduation, I accepted the offer of working on Sina website, where I was mainly responsible for the batch installation of operating system, tailor of the software package, the safety configuration, the smooth running of the equipments on line, the test and recovery of various hardware failures. Meanwhile, I was in charge of the immediate response and disposal of the accidents and the exact maintenance of thousands of servers in the whole company.
As a system engineer in Sina website, there are a lot of things to do in the application process, operating system and network as well as in the hardware. We generally solve the problems by our own practical experience combining with the related professional literatures and the knowledge we have learnt.
Years of working experience made me realized clearly that it has still a long way to go to achieve my dream---becoming an expert in this field. I have to step out of the “flowers” coating me now for my achievements to the further study for the next station on the way of life. Therefore, I need a nutritious academic atmosphere.
It was my curiosity that pushed me onto the road of learning new technologies and it was my strong learning ability and capability that presented me with the current achievement. I believe that standing at the cross road of life after a few years further study, I will be more confident and stronger expectative for my future.
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