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2014考研英语写作预测模板:招聘歧视

 

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  写作原文

  The undergraduate, who is on his way to a job interview, is stunned after hearing a ridiculous condition: the position is only for the man born in the year of dog. More ironically, a dog is eager to try. Conspicuously, that is a horrible depiction concerning the discrimination in job market.Over the past years, all kinds of discriminations(改为discrimination,它是一个不可数名词) have been condemned or made illegal, but one insidious form continue to thrive: some harsh conditions some employers imposed when recruit new,(句子成分不清,建议改为some harsh conditions are imposed on the employers when a company recruit new) ranging from height to household registration. So, what cause(改为causes) these problems? Firstly, thetremendous number of graduates- still mounting each year- make organizations powerless to screen out right candidates. (本句话说服力不够强)For which(改为this) reason, numerous bizarre approaches were came out to find “the right person”. Moreover, the current state of affairs may have been encouraged by lack of severe penalty and punishment to those arrogant organizations who(改为which) shrink the obligation of selecting eligible staff. A good case in point is one of my roommates, with excellent performance in the job interview, failed to obtain the occupation(本句话可改为who performs excellently in the job interview, bu...

2014考研英语写作预测范文:污染问题

 

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2014考研英语写作模板:论污染(范文及批改)

  写作原文

  As is vividly depicted in the picture, two drain pipes are draining much sewage into the river while some chimneys emit poison gas into the sky.(首段内容较为简略,可适当添加)Why do(改为does) our environment get more and more bad(表达有误,“越来越糟”应表示为worse and worse)? The main reason is(后面若要跟句子,就应该用从句来表述,加that) there are a lot of factories that(去掉) emit so much sewage and poison gas that aren't purified into our nature directly. Besides, we don't have a few good habits, so you can see littering, spitting and smoking frequently. There are so many people who are using plastic bag.Of course, we need plenty of factories because they will promote the development of our economy. But does it mean that our environment has to be contaminated? Our economy must be development(此处应选择动词,改为developed), but it shouldn't be at the expense of the pollution of our environment. We shouldn't be so selfish that we disregard the next generation. (一句话中出现两个we,不妥,建议作者将此句话改为:We shouldn’t be selfish to disregard to the next generation )We must protect our environment! On the one hand, it isn't until we dispose of sewage and poison gas that we can emit . On the other hand, we must encourage people to give up the bad habit(改为habits).Let's work together to have a beautiful country!

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  文章结构清晰,内容完整。看着你的作...

2014考研英语写作范文模板点评

 

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  写作原文

  In the picture,there is an unbalanced(改为imbalanced,imbalance表示“失衡,不平衡”,而unbalance表示“[力]失衡,精神错乱”) seesaw on which the one side sitting a woman with her body shaking(可改为where a women is sitting with her body shaking on the one side), and on the other side,15 men are going down on their knees asking(改为to ask,用动词不定时表示目的) the woman to marry them. The picture reveals the unbalanced(改为imbalanced)sex ratio in our country. So what causes this phenomenon?In my opinion, there are mainly two reasons. First, the conception "prefer sons to daughters" is very popular in our country. Through(改为Though,through为介词“通过”,though则表示“虽然”) it is not as intensive as in the old society, most parents,especially the ones in remote areas still want to have a son. Further more, along with the "Birth control" policy, some parents would(情态动词使用不当,可改为may) choose to abandon their child when they know she is a girl.In order to solve this problem, various measures have to be adopted. As to the government, it should draw up laws to reinforce the punishment of abortion. As to the parents, they should change their prejudice to children, and build up the conception of "It makes no differences if the baby is a girl or a boy". I think under the joint effort of the government and the individuals, the condition of unbalanced(改为imbalanced) ...

考研英语:2014考研英语写作高频词汇总结

 

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  一、近义词汇:

  1.完全:absolute, unconditional, unlimited, complete, unrestricted, unmixed, perfect, entire

  2.好:extraordinary, amazing, miraculous, marvelous, stupendous, excellent, good, well, wonderful, fine, nice, of high quality, pleasing, surprising, agreeable

  3.小:small, diminutive, puny, little, pocket-sized, petit, minute, tiny

  4.多:big , enormous, large, gigantic, vast, tremendous, gargantuan, huge, immense, a lot of, lots of, many, much, plenty of, a great deal of, a number of, an amount of, a great many, a good many, many a, scores of, dozens of, a great quantity of

  5.高兴,快乐:delighted, delightful, pleased, pleasing, charmed, pleasant, cheerful, cheering, merry, happy, gratified, glad, gay, agreeable, friendly, content, satisfied, light-hearted, joyful

  6.真的:True, truthful, veracious, faithful, accurate, loyal, staunch, genuine, honest, real, trustworthy, constant.

  7.全,都:all, whole, entire, complete, perfect, total, the whole number of , unbroken , gross

  二、常见的连接词

  连接词根据其本身的意思和文章连接所需要的逻辑意义可分为几类:

  a.表示开场to begin with , in the first place , in general , generally speaking

  b.表示总结to summarize , to sum up , to conclude , in conclusion , finally

  c.表示举例a case in point , a good illustration / example of … is …,

  d.表示原因because , since , for , the cause of , the reason for , n...

2014考研英语写作指南:高分作文5大要点

 

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  考研英语作文的趋势就是图画题,这种题目难度较大,有的图比较空洞。在平时多读、多写和多改的基础上,一定要注意多积累闪光词和经典语句,这样才能写出高分作文。考研英语写作也占有较大分值,大家不要轻言放弃哦!下面为大家总结了有助于拿到高分的5个要点:

  1、认真审题

  考研作文忌信手拈来,提笔就写,根本不审题,想到哪儿就写到哪儿,置考试要求于不顾,作文第一步是仔细审题,考生要仔细阅读试题要求及相关信息,如图表,图画,数字等,准确把握出题者意图。

  2、列出提纲,慎重落笔

  虽说考试时间有限,但是切忌匆忙落笔开始胡写乱诌。你可以先花一点时间列个提纲,对原始材料分析归纳后要形成一个基本的框架。文章打算分几段写,每段大概怎样写,自数控制在多少,开头段落是道破主题,点名要旨,引人入胜还是先给出主题一般的背景情况和对主题进行浓缩的陈述呢,中间段落和结尾有怎样写呢。这些都要心中有数。

  3、突出重点,注重逻辑

  开始落笔写作,考生在选择材料时应注重选择那些最能体现中心思想、最具代表性的材料,这些材料要共同表达一致的信息。选材时切忌胡子眉毛一把抓。词语堆积,不伦不类。前后及段落之间在逻辑关系上要紧密衔接,不能把没有任何逻辑关系的词放在一起。可以用恰当的关联词把思想连贯的表达出来。

  

4.用词准确,语法正确

  考试时要特别注意语法,此语,语气,标点符号等,为了避免太多单词拼写错误,语法错误,不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词,不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇,短语,句式。

  5.题目要求要达到

  字数要符合作文题目要求,否则很难拿高分。如果时间允许,可以在答完后进行修改。检查一下词汇拼写是否准确,构句语法等是否正确。

  考研英语作文频道推荐链接:

  2014考研英语作文预测汇总

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2014考研英语写作指南:常用句型汇总

 

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  在英语写作中,有一些句型的搭配能力非常强,基本上可以用在各种话题的议论文中,如果能将这些句型掌握并熟练应用一定会使你的英文写作得心应手。想不想试一试呢?

  一、开头句型

  我们常说,良好的开端等于成功的一半。做事如此,作文也是如此。所以我们颇有必要在作文的开头花一番心思。

  在写议论文时,你通常以什么样的方式开头呢?最简单也最常用的可能就是开门见山法。也就是说———直截了当地提出你对这个问题的观点,点出文章的中心思想。

  I....has both advantages and

  disadvantages.……既有利又有弊。例如:

  1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.

  2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.

  3.Com pared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages.

  举一反三:

  1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many

  disadvantages.

  2....has many advantages.For example,...However,just as every

  coin has two sides,...has its

  disadvantages.(本例将利弊分开讲,转折过渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背诵。)

  II....play(s)an important role /part

  in...……在……中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。例如:

  1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.

  2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.

  Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.

  3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.

  4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness.

  举一反三:

  1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.

  2.In the past,letters played...

2014考研英语写作指南:走出备考误区

 

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  忽视优秀范文的背诵:通过范文的背诵,我们可以有针对性的了解高分范文的写作特点,积累写作常用的词语表达,和闪光句型,解决考生在进行写作训练时,心中有千言万语,笔下无一言的困境。但是,考生一定要谨记,高分范文的背诵在精不在多,20篇足够,但是一定要背的滚瓜烂熟,张口就能说,提笔就能写。很多考生抱怨过,我背了很多范文,可还是什么也写不出来,根本原因就是这些范文背诵不够熟练,根本没有深化成自己的东西。

  写作训练的量不足:很多时候,考生容易高估自己的写作水平,或者说,意识不到自己的经常会犯下的语法错误。这些问题只有通过实战才能发现并解决。但是在这个过程中,考生练习时写的作文,必须英语水平好的同学或是老师,有条件的同学可以请专业的认识进行批改,只有这样,训练的作用才能最大化。

  准备不足,匆忙下笔:任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的,所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多考生目前存在一个情况,想到哪写到哪,使作文杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。英语写作不是语文散文,写英语作文,之前一定要认真审题和思考,对出题者希望得到的预期尚未揣摩透彻,这也就造成了一些同学虽然语言功底非常不错,但是最终的结果还是没有拿到一个自己预期的心理分数,最大的问题就出在切题不准确或者不够突出中心上了。

  忽视文化差异,用中文思维串联英文词汇:一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下,会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来,然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。在这样的作文里,我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子:“When Iwas a child,my parents very love me。”(正确表达:When Iwas achild,my parents loved me very much)。

  纠正作文备考误区 提升考研英语写作实力

  要想取得考研作文的高分,提高写作实力是至关重要的。背诵范文是一个很好的途径,做到烂熟于心,张口就来,尤其是历年来考研中出现的高分作文;其次是把背诵的文章进行默写,检验自己书写的流畅程度;最后也是最重要的就是把别人用过的好词好句型变成自己的,活学活用,根据同样的题目有写出自己的文章来。当然,掌握一定的写作技巧也是很重要的。要想在考研写作中立于不败之地,大家还是应该在切实提高英语写作实力的前提下掌握写作技巧,只有这样才能写出让阅卷老师满意的高分作文。如何提高英语写作实力?跨考考研向考生介绍三步走方法:背诵→默写→仿写。

  一、背诵。背诵是唯一最有效的方法,通过大量阅读、大量背诵可以提高英语积累。

  二、默写。我们总面对一个困境就是单词总是简单,写对太难。多次重复的默写练习,反复纠正自己的拼写错误,可显著提高写作得分,减少不必要丢分。

  三、仿写。根据背诵的文章写出新的文章,成组练习。

  考研英语作文分为小作文,大作文两种。考查内容有区别,写作套路各不同。小作文满分10分,多是辞职信、道歉信、感谢信等应用文体。大作文满分20分,要求根据提示信息写一篇160-200词的短文,提示信息一般为图表。

  通过对近些年的真题分析,大作文大...

2014考研英语作文写作实用技法

 

  词句提升闪光点的七种武器——化腐朽为神奇

  这些技巧不难,只是改动一个词或者一个词组就能提升你的语言的地道性。建议每篇文章用3~5个,可以在文章中增加闪光点。

  1、强调名词【very+名词】

  有同学说名词的强调直接用 it is…that不就搞定了么?这里介绍的是一个更地道的用法,就是用very+名词的形式。比如:03年温室花朵的范文

  The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the very flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm.

  Very一词用的很地道,如此这样的一个花朵,被保护起来。如果这句用强调句it is …that来写,估计你自己把句式结构都弄乱了。有时候要长短句结合,通篇文章全都是复合句老师也会看腻的,要长短句结合,才是最好的有节奏感的文章。

  2、强调动词【do/does/did+动词原形】

  The picture does state that they will travel extensively from north to south together with their combined legs.

  有同学问了,你说的这两个强调有什么用。强调句显得你的用词更加地道,让你文章的节奏感更强。庖丁解牛中的一、1也是一个强调动词的用法。

  3、 强调形容词 副词+形容词

  4、 定语从句的介词前置提升

  5、 当用到相同意思的词的时候,先写高级的用法,后写一般的用法。

  3~5这三条和在一块说,因为要用到同一个例句。副词+形容词?这个我们都知道啊,还用你金翅告诉我们。这里的副词不是一般的副词,而是和形容词同义的副词。可能说的太抽象,举一个例子,也是超级华丽的一句话,加到你的模板中。

  Although life of citizens has been greatly changed,there is no denying the fact that the problem of internet,with which Chinese people are faced,becomes severely serious. 随着人们的生活发生了巨大的变化,这个事实是不可否认的:网络问题,中国人民所面对的这个问题,变得非常的严重。

  3:这里用severely来强调 serious,因为两者是同义词,一个是副词形式、一个是形容词,强调的效果更强。比becomes very serious效果强的不是一倍两倍。另建议作文中尽量少出现very,因为very是一个很主观的词,你要阐述你的观点,摆事实讲道理,要客观、要有理有据。Very这个词太主观,基本没有说服力。怎么提升文章的说服力,后文有...

2014考研 英语写作八大实用句型有哪些

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    考研英语写作只要大家认真复习是很容易提分的,建议大家在冲刺阶段背诵范文的同时也要注意经典句型的积累。

  以下为考生整理的2014年考研英语写作八大实用句型,希望对考生们有所帮助,取得2014考研的成功。

  写作句型一:

  No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.

  没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

  It goes without saying that …

  写作句型二:

  People equate(等同v.)success in life with the ability of operating computer.

  人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

  Equate success with one's character

  写作句型三:

  According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

  依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。

  According to a recent research or investigation, …

  写作句型四:

  The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

  最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

  The lastest survey show that…

  写作句型五:

  No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

  没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

  No other medium has received more attraction than internet.

  写作句型六:

  People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

  人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

  People seem to fail to take into account the fact that the serious pollution is binging abour harm to people's health.

  写作句型七:

  Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitne...

2014考研 英语写作冲刺复习方法

 

    作文像水,没有固定的答案,但是也不是想写什么写什么,大家要记住,千万不能跑题,同时还要注意英语作文大纲的要求以及大家常犯的错误。

  2014年新大纲对英语作文提出一些要求,小作文要求有考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等,以及一般描述性、叙述性、说明性或议论性的文章。

  大作文要求:考生根据提示信息写出一篇160~200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。

  写作时,考生应能:

  1) 做到语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当;

  2) 遵循文章的特定文体格式;

  3) 合理组织文章结构,使其内容统一、连贯;

  4) 根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语域*。

  短期突击快速提分方法:

  一、注意最基本标点使用

  英语中没有顿号,在汉语需要顿号的情况下可以用逗号。

  汉语中的引言通常都是:“”的格式,而英语中不用冒号,用逗号,如, “ ”。

  书名、文章名等出版物名称用下划线或者斜体字表示(手写时用下划线)。

  破折号可以用于在一个句子的前面或后面加入额外的注释,灵活地运用破折号可以使长句子变得更加生动,增加文章的文采。

  二、注意语法常犯错误项

  英文写作非常讲究语法,尤其是考研作文作为正式文体,需要注意以下几点小细节:

  1、尽量少用缩写形式。如don't, can't, won't写做do not, cannot, will not等。

  2、用更加正式的否定形式。如not… any写做no, not… much 写做 little, not many 写做few等。

  3、尽量少用“etc.”, “and so on”等表达方式。

  4、尽量把副词和动词放在一起。

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