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1.使用了正确的语法结构，比方说，动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、冠词错误和介词错误。
2.句式有变化
3.使用了一定的词汇量。
4.拼写没有错误。
5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想，所有扩展句都紧扣主题。
6.使用了过渡性词语，因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。
7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。
8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。
9.明确的观点。
10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。
1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点，最先检查首段，和每段的首末句。
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03-07
Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Someone think that we must return to the olds， more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are in a selfish world today. We are so busy looking out for number one， so saturated by our own problems， our own issues and our own little and often petty concerns that we failed to see how all could grow and being benefited by working together as a team. As far as I am concerned， the reason of the individual greed and selfishness were actually caused by the faster and faster development and more and more competition of the society.
Some people yearn to return to the old and traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. According to them ， people were more honest and warm-hearted and the manner of traditional treating each other was simple and selfless in the past.
Personally， I do not support this view . Even in the past， greed and selfishness existed in our society. These two factors never disappeared since human have instinctive material needs， individual wants and desires would swell surely with the advances of life and society. Moreover， old tradition has its own limit and could only adapt for a certain period. I believe that the key point here is to create a better worl...
03-07
Crime is without doubt a huge problem in every country in the world. There are certain countries，cities，towns and districts where the crime rate is extremely high and such places are very dangerous places to be. Without doubt these areas desperately need new government policies and a shift in actions by the police to remedy a desperate situation. These places tend to be areas of high unemployment and poverty. If the focus were placed on finding and creating jobs in these places the crime problem would improve. Instead governments go for easy options such as increasing the lengths of prison sentences. This treats the results of crime，not it's causes.
Nevertheless，such places are few and far between. The vast majority of places in the world are perfectly safe places to live. People who are afraid to leave their homes do so largely for two reasons. Firstly，they were unfortunate enough to be victim of a crime. Secondly，and most importantly，they hear about crime everywhere： TV，radio，papers. In some areas crime stories take up a huge percentage of news. If you hear about crime all the time，you begin to believe its everywhere. This is simply not the case.
Crime has been around since man first appeared on earth and will continue to be here till we leave. Of course there are measures governments could take to improve the situation but they can't eradicate crime. What measures should be taken depend on ones political opinions.
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避免在雅思写作考试中丢分
有位学生曾经询问我关于雅思考试 (国际英语语言测试系统)的一个问题 ： “如果一位考生所写的文章不是按照考官所要求的方式来写的，那么他最多可能会被扣除多少分？” 以下就是我的答案：
我不太确定您的问题什么意思。 您是想询问如果考生的个人观点与考官的观点完全不同，您是否会被扣分吗？ 如果您想询问这方面的问题，我的答案就是绝对没有任何不同。
雅思写作任务2中要求考生对所给话题表达自己的清楚的观点。这里，单词“position” 的意思是“对某一问题的观点或态度”。
考生通过清楚的表达他们的观点，列举支撑性的例子说明自己的观点来展示自己的能力。根据考官的评定，考官会在“作文评分栏”（考官需要填写的四个评分栏之一）里从1分到9分不等列出考生的作文成绩。
评分过程
为了恰当填写考试评分栏的分数，考官需要确定考生是否充分，适当地对话题进行了谈论。 考官需要特别考虑的是：
• 考生的观点陈述是否清楚，有概括性。
例如，话题可能是让考生谈论是否应该将出售香烟被定为非法。考生可能只是简单的对文章进行简单的评论：“将出售香烟定为非法有利有弊” 。如果考生没有针对应该禁止出售香烟作出清楚的结论，那么他就不会得到高分。
• 考生在文章中如何提出，支持自己的观点。
考生需要确定有充分的论据来支撑自己的整体观点。 这些论据应该是具体并且解释明确，这就要求需要有足够的例子来阐释自己的观点。
• 考生的观点与所给话题是否相关。
如果考生的列举的所有论据均与所给话题密切相关，考生自然就会得到高分。相反，如果考生所列举的论据与话题只是部分相关，甚至毫不相关，考生只能得到低分。
即使考官与考生所持观点相反，考生也有可能得到9分的最高分。
例如，考生也许在文章中表达这样一种观点：不应该禁止香烟销售。 然而，考官也许强烈坚信应该取缔香烟销售。 双方在看法上的不同不会对考生的得分造成影响。 而是， 考生应该提出并为自己的整体观点进行辩解，这点是至关重要的。
换句话说，考生对话题所持观点可以与考官的个人不同。
计算失分
下面看一下雅思作文考试中得失分情况。 失分有其范围，主要取决于错误的类型。
这是我从写作评分标准中挑选出的扣分标准：
• 等级5 (话题相关度) ： 文章只是部分陈述话题。
例如，题目可能要求考生不仅写出是否应该取缔香烟，而且建议一些方式如何减少吸烟引起的问题。
如果文章只对题目要求的其中一部分(即香烟销售应该被取缔)，但是并没有建议其他方式来减少吸烟带来的问题，这样就会扣分。
• 等级5 (连贯性和衔接性) ：文章没有进行分段或者分段不合理。也就是说文章不是按照恰当的文体结构来写的，不分开头段落，两到三段的主体段落和结尾段落。
• 等级4 (话题相关度) ： 文章只与话题有少许相关。
这儿，单词“tangential”的意思是“少许相关”。这就意味着考生所写文章只与话题相关性很小。
例如，考生可能以吸烟带来的...
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